User:Riddle2525/Editing/Lastolympian01 Peer Review

General info
Dreadpiraterobin, Literatepigeon, Riddle2525, Willsm1.
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Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead and its follow up paragraphs provide a good explanation of editing, what it is, who does it, and in what industries. The initial definition is well written, includes relevant links, and would be accessible to potential readers.

There are some good edits and references included in the sandbox.

The content expands upon what is mentioned in the beginning and contains good information for each section. The see also list is a helpful addition for readers to find more information about certain types of editing.

There are a satisfactory amount of references and sources and the further reading section is a good idea.

When looking at the technical editing section I feel it could be more concise and film editing could be expanded upon and link to its own Wikipedia article.