User:Ridley0526/Chicago Boys/Panchovillastan Peer Review

Overall I really liked your contributions!

In this section I was confused at first so I think it need to be more concise "After they finished their studies Latin America they adopted positions in numerous South American governments including the military dictatorship of Chile (1973–1990), as economic advisors." I recommend rephrasing it something along the lines of "After finishing their studies they returned to Latin America where they adopted positions in numerous South American governments including the military dictatorship of Chile (1973–1990), as economic advisors." The reason I was confused is because of the way it was phrased. It sounded as if the Chicago Boys studied in Latin America.

I noticed some simple grammatical errors for example not capitalizing the first word in the sentence however I know this will quickly and easily be solved after rereading it as I know I have committed the same mistake.

I think if possible for your Policies section you should name the specific policies you are referring to. Of course only do this if you know the policy names. I think my doing this it makes this section less broad. when possible replace "a policy" with the specific policy then keep the parts when you explain that policy. For example, The Chicago Boys promoted a policy of (Name of policy)which is a policy of strict austerity and later continued to cut government expenditures substantially.

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