User:Righteye1234/Presidency of Ronald Reagan/MicaelaFeltl Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Righteye1234


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Righteye1234/Presidency_of_Ronald_Reagan?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Presidency of Ronald Reagan

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content presented is relevant to the subject and comes from reliable sources. However there are a lot of grammatical errors and words like "America" and "Ronald Reagan" are not capitalized. The tone of the article seems to have a biased tone especially in sentences like "He also expanded and strengthened are military like never seen before putting our American soldiers first". The article also needs more details about what exactly it was Reagan did, for example, to put the soldiers first.