User:Rikooka/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Strange Affair (1981 film)


 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead: It includes a introductory sentence about what this article will be about. It is very concise with only the basic information. A brief summary of the film could be added.
 * Content: The content of the article is relevant and up to date. It includes the plot, cast and the awards that the film has received, which seems to be a good start. I would recommend adding some information on the director and the main actors, as well as some critiques that the film has received
 * Sources: I could not access the page attached in the "reference" section which is problematic because people that are interested in the article and would like to learn more or want to verify the information, cannot do so.


 * Sources
 * https://letterboxd.com/film/strange-affair-1981/ for quick summary of the film.

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Toyo Eiwa University


 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead: good introduction to the article with a concise, yet informative sentence
 * Content: the academic section seems to be underdeveloped and has more information that can be added.
 * Sources: It only had the website of the school, so a second source should be included to make the article more reliable.


 * Sources
 * https://www.edarabia.com/toyo-eiwa-university-yokohama-japan/

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Ippei Watanabe (swimmer)


 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead: It introduces the article well with a concise sentence
 * Content: even though the medal record part of the article is very descriptive and looks complete, the overall article seems very short and lacks content.
 * Tone and Balance: It is a well-written informative piece, without taking one side over the other.
 * To improve: I think adding his past in his youth can be relevant and informative


 * Sources

https://www.ldh.co.jp/eng/management/watanabe_i/