User:Rileysieron/sandbox

SA #25

1. What stub did you choose? Why did you choose this one? Copy and past the URL link into your Sandbox

Lily Alrdidge, a model. Lily Aldridge

2. How do you know that it's a stub: Identify where on the page that you know that this is a stub

On the talk page, it is rated start-class.

3. What are some missing or under-developed parts of this stub? A good way to determine this is to compare your stub to a more developed article on the same topic and category. So for example, if you chose a stub-article on a horror novel, look for another Wikipedia article on another horror novel that is more fully developed. What is missing on your stub page in comparison? You should devote 4-5 sentences to answering this question.

I compared this articel to a well known model, Gigi Hadid. Her wikipedia page has very in-depth information about her career and what lead up to it. Lily's article is missing a lot about her personal life. It lists her schools and parents, but not much more. I think adding more about her childhood and what made her get into modeling would be good to add here. It also has a list of the magazines, music videos, and other work shes done, including being a victoria's secret model. Although the article does list her jobs, it doesnt give much information about them. I would like to add what music vidoes, timelines, and more information about her work life.

4. In particular, locate the "References" section of the stub. What, if anything, is listed in the references? If the references are hyperlinked, do the links still work?

There are around 35 refernces in the article. The links do work, some of them are interviews and news articles.

5. And, when you compare this stub to a well developed article of the same category type, what sections of the overall article are present, and what are missing?

I compared this article to Gigi Hadid's Gigi Hadid. In lily's article is only has her personal life and career. Adding more information to these and adding more sections would help the article.

From Dr. Hildebrandt: Good job on both this and SA #24, Riley. I think that you are well on your way to finding an article that you can edit.

SA #26

Dierbergs Markets

History[edit]
In 1914, William Dierberg moved to Creve Coeur to help run the general store. The store was located at the "Creve Coeur House", which had the 14 Mile House hotel and the Creve Coeur Farmer's Bank. From Dr. Hildebrandt: Looks good, Riley!