User:Rileysteg/Wind Cave National Park/Nherbison Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rileysteg


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rileysteg/Wind_Cave_National_Park?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Wind Cave National Park

Evaluate the drafted changes
Looking forward to further development of the climate change section, I think that discussing the regions projected climate is super smart, maybe try and find NPS predictions for Wind Cave or nearby protected areas to compare/further develop ideas? "The Great Plains, where Wind Cave is located has seen considerable warming through the years." doesn't quite sit right with me grammatically, maybe try including another comma after 'Wind Cave'. Additionally, this feels like an "and" statement, almost like half of the sentence is missing. I like the direction you're headed in though!

This work looks great. The climate sections seems that it needs a bit more information as it talks about how the average temperature has increased but it does not state what this will affect. This could lead into your next section about ecology and could be a great way for you to start talking about how the temperature is affecting wildlife.