User:Rimbaud1230/Attachment theory/Zhaozhhan Peer Review

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Rimbaud1230


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 * Creating User:Rimbaud1230/Attachment theory/Zhaozhhan Peer Review - Wikipedia


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 * Attachment theory - Wikipedia

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This is the detailed explanation for attachment theory, with clear definition, case studies and related research. I especially love the part that the article includes the culture difference, considering parents may raise children different in different culture. The article mainly focused on the children and how theory can apply to them, including the history, the transaction from children to teenagers and the practical applications. However, I found out the article has less information of how the theory apply to adults. The article has few paragraph for Attachment styles in adults, and I think you could look for more styles or evidence in this part, such as how theory can be used in marketing and business area. Maybe you could refer to the following section, crime. That is also the application of theory in adults and it is like the attachment to the main theory, with history, and other detailed introductions.