User:RioBC/HIV and pregnancy/Medmoon Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

HIV and pregnancy, RioBC


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * HIV and pregnancy

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead & content have been updated in accordance to what the editors have described to be their goals in terms of removing medical jargon and adding inclusive, nonbinary language. The lead is also organized into 4 concise paragraphs that accurately describe HIV & pregnancy.

Sources & references have been updated & work to link corresponding work.

The tone is neutral, and adding nonbinary, inclusive language allows readers to view HIV & pregnancy using scientific data points to help clarify misconceptions some may have when thinking about HIV infections in pregnant individuals.


 * I think this looks great and I appreciate the changes that you are/planning to make. Just one feedback is that I would explain the use of nonbinary language so everyone who visits the page can understand why nonbinary language is used throughout the text.