User:Ritup1212/Artificial ventilation/Aml1251 Peer Review

General info
Ritup1212
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Artificial_ventilation&oldid=1212570865
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Artificial ventilation

Evaluate the drafted changes
I had a hard time finding your edits since you didn't do it in the sandbox like you were suppose to, but I think I was able to find your revisions in the actual article - but I could be wrong.


 * In the Lead, the definitions you added are not necessary at that point and should be removed and added later in the article when relevant.
 * The first hyperlink in the Lead is a little wonky - it should be hyperlinking the relevant term.
 * Some citations are missing for some of the claims made in the article. One is in the History section.

Other than that, the citations you added looked really good and you kept a pretty neutral tone.