User:RiverScullerPDX/Economic violence/Aemoe85 Peer Review

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Hey there! So it doesn't look like you've contributed too much to the Economic Violence article, so I'm going to review the article and suggest changes on it that you could potentially piggyback off of.

The second sentence in the lead mentions economic violence against LGBT+, but is not elaborated on within the body of the article. You could potentially expand upon that. There is also mention of economic violence being consider domestic violence, but I do not see it in the body of the article.

The article maintains a neutral tone. All citations are functional. The article needs to be added to. I'm wondering if you could include neoliberalism as a form of economic violence in a broader definition of the word. Is the destruction of property economic violence?

Good luck!

- Aerin