User:RiverScullerPDX/Economic violence/MacBook2024 Peer Review

General info
(RiverScullPDX)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:RiverScullerPDX/Economic violence
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Economic violence

Lead

 * 1) Introduction: The lead should offer a clear and concise definition of "economic violence," highlighting its significance and relevance. Consider addressing what economic violence entails, the forms it takes, and its impact on individuals and societies.
 * 2) Content Overview: While the lead is not yet developed, it should eventually include a brief overview of the key sections you plan to cover in the article. This might include the causes of economic violence, examples from various contexts, its effects on communities, and potential solutions or interventions.
 * 3) Conciseness and Relevance: Ensure the lead is to the point, avoiding overly detailed explanations that belong in the main body of the article. Every statement in the lead should have a corresponding elaboration in the article body.

Article Body
Given the article body is not yet provided, here are some general pointers:


 * 1) Structure: Organize the article into clear, logical sections that each address a specific aspect of economic violence. Possible sections could include definitions, causes, types (e.g., employment discrimination, economic exploitation, denial of resources), impacts, case studies, and interventions.
 * 2) Relevance and Completeness: Ensure all content directly relates to economic violence and provides a comprehensive view of the topic. Consider whether there are any significant aspects or viewpoints missing.
 * 3) Equity and Representation: Address how economic violence might disproportionately affect marginalized communities. Including diverse perspectives and examples can enrich the article.

Tone and Balance

 * 1) Neutrality: Strive for a neutral tone throughout, presenting information based on evidence and avoiding bias.
 * 2) Representation of Viewpoints: Include a balanced representation of different theories, studies, and perspectives on economic violence, ensuring no single viewpoint dominates unfairly.

Sources and References
Since references are not yet provided:


 * 1) Quality and Reliability: Aim to use high-quality, reliable sources such as academic journals, and books by experts in the field.
 * 2) Currency: Ensure your sources are up-to-date, reflecting the most current research and discussions on the topic.
 * 3) Diversity: Include sources from a variety of authors, especially those from underrepresented groups who may offer valuable insights into the topic.

Organization and Grammar

 * 1) Clarity and Readability: As you develop the article, ensure the writing is clear, concise, and accessible to a general audience. Avoid jargon where possible, or clearly explain it when necessary.
 * 2) Proofreading: Carefully check for and correct grammatical errors, typos, and formatting inconsistencies.

Overall Impressions

 * Strengths: Starting with a clear focus on economic violence sets a solid foundation for an informative article.
 * Areas for Improvement: As the article is developed, focus on building a comprehensive, balanced, and well-sourced discussion of the topic.