User:RiverScullerPDX/Economic violence/Szelinsky Peer Review

General info
RiverScullerPDX, Orangetruncate
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:RiverScullerPDX/Economic violence
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Economic violence

Evaluate the drafted changes
It looks like the article is at a very preliminary stage, and I am not able to find any plans or drafting through the sandbox or bibliography links that were connected to the article.

I think there is definitely exciting room for improvement in this article, depending on what their intentions are for it! It seems like the variation in definitions are quite limited, as well as the examples. There can be lots of room for diversity in geographic examples. Additionally, although LGBTQ+ individuals are mentioned, there isn't an expanding section on the topic. The one article in the references section in the bibliography may be a great start to expanding on one of those example areas. I am also seeing a few places that may be missing a reference in the existing article.

Finally, reorganization may be able to add more coherence to the article.

Good luck to all! :) Szelinsky (talk) 03:52, 17 February 2024 (UTC)