User:Riyaaarul/Water supply and sanitation in Nicaragua/Sunflower110902 Peer Review

General info
Riyaaarul
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Riyaaarul/Water supply and sanitation in Nicaragua
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Water supply and sanitation in Nicaragua

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I really liked the new section that you added and felt that it flowed quite nicely with the prior information included in the original text. After reading through the original article and reading it back with your added sections, it is definitely something that the article was missing. There was a few questions where I felt the wording was a bit off, such as:


 * The implementation of the "Modelo de Gestion Descontentrado," granting increases autonomy to regional departments like Granada, emphasizing efforts to streamline service delivery, often concentrating resources and attention on urban centers.
 * The shift of national water services towards urban areas in water service provisioning and policymaking reflects broader trends observed within several other regions of Latin America as well, emphasizing the challenges associated with rural water access and the centralization of water management efforts towards urban populations.
 * too long of a sentence, try rewording to make it easier to read
 * Moreover, government induced reliance on urban engineers and private contractors for water and sanitation projects in Nicaraguan rural areas of Las Mesas Sur and El Cedro, highlighting a pattern where the unique cultural preferences and needs of rural communities are often negotiated in favor of urban interests and capital benefit.
 * This feels like a run-on sentence. Could definitely split up into two different sentences.


 * Moreover, the empahsizer of centralized water service provisions as often endoresed by the government can neglect the specific needs of rural regions, urging for more inclusive and smaller muncipalitiy based frameworks to be considered.
 * was this supposed to say "the emphasis of centralized water service..." ?

Overall, it was a very well structured draft. I would go back and fix some really long sentences that felt a bit hard to read. Since the article itself is solely about Water supply and sanitation in Nicaragua you don't need to make reference to other Latin American countries.