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 * Focal Segmental Glomerulosclerosis


 * Article Evaluation
 * Completeness - Article lacks a descriptive opening section, which fails to summarize the highlights involving disease pathology, diagnosis, treatment, and prognosis. Certain headings, such as "Signs and Symptoms" and "Tests" are incomplete and lack content description.
 * Citations - Although present in the article, citations are not consistently provided to support the facts presented. Moreover, some citations in the "References" section are incomplete, and some primary sources are reported.
 * Organization - Standard headings found in high-quality Medical articles are not present. Standard initial headings include Signs and Symptoms, Causes, and Pathophysiology. This article fails to present headings using this organizing scheme.


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 * Fogo AB. Causes and pathogenesis of focal segmental glomerulosclerosis. Nat Rev Nephrol. 2015 Feb;11(2):76-87. doi: 10.1038/nrneph.2014.216. Epub 2014 Dec 2. PMID: 25447132; PMCID: PMC4772430.
 * Reidy K, Kaskel FJ. Pathophysiology of focal segmental glomerulosclerosis. Pediatr Nephrol. 2007 Mar;22(3):350-4. doi: 10.1007/s00467-006-0357-2. Epub 2007 Jan 10. PMID: 17216262; PMCID: PMC1794138.
 * Vas T, Degrell P, Pintér I, Késoi I, Kovács T, Nagy J. Focalis segmentalis glomerulosclerosis [Focal segmental glomerulosclerosis]. Orv Hetil. 2008 Feb 10;149(6):243-8. Hungarian. doi: 10.1556/OH.2008.28264. PMID: 18238713.
 * Pollak MR. Focal segmental glomerulosclerosis: recent advances. Curr Opin Nephrol Hypertens. 2008 Mar;17(2):138-42. doi: 10.1097/MNH.0b013e3282f5dbe4. PMID: 18277145.
 * Hirayama K, Hagiwara M, Yamagata K, Koyama A. [Focal segmental glomerulosclerosis: Pathogenesis, pathophysiology, and therapy]. Nihon Rinsho. 2006 Feb;64 Suppl 2:422-6. Japanese. PMID: 16523926.
 * Benchimol C. Focal segmental glomerulosclerosis: pathogenesis and treatment. Curr Opin Pediatr. 2003 Apr;15(2):171-80. doi: 10.1097/00008480-200304000-00006. PMID: 12640274.
 * Helal I, Fick-Brosnahan GM, Reed-Gitomer B, Schrier RW. Glomerular hyperfiltration: definitions, mechanisms and clinical implications. Nat Rev Nephrol. 2012 Feb 21;8(5):293-300. doi: 10.1038/nrneph.2012.19. PMID: 22349487.
 * Cho MH, Hong EH, Lee TH, Ko CW. Pathophysiology of minimal change nephrotic syndrome and focal segmental glomerulosclerosis. Nephrology (Carlton). 2007 Dec;12 Suppl 3:S11-4. doi: 10.1111/j.1440-1797.2007.00875.x. PMID: 17995521.

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