User:Rj115/Tír na nÓg/Grizzly Bear Hunter Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rj115


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rj115/T%C3%ADr_na_nÓg?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Tír na nÓg

Evaluate the drafted changes
I was thinking that as an idea, you could maybe expand on the reasonings behind the other Old Irish names that are meant to describe the Celtic Otherworld. Another idea I had that you could describe what eternal youth means to the Irish and how they view what they consider that to be, whether it’s about life after death or if it is simply eternal youth that they are referring to. Make sure that when you do this that the sources are neutral and don’t side with one certain view, but rather evaluates all the views on the topic.