User:Rj preme/Renaissance (Beyoncé album)/Alice.lous Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rj preme


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Rj preme/Renaissance (Beyoncé album)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Renaissance (Beyoncé album)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think more sources could've been used.. your edits fit right into the flow of the language usage in the original article. The only thing I think you could fix is some grammar such as starting with "thanked beyonce" then following up with "thanks beyonce" a few words later on.