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Option 1

 * Article title: P2RX4

Content

 * The writing is often vague or sporadically highly specific at times. No clear description of the receptor's function or structure is given: 'the P2X4 receptor has a typical P2X receptor structure.' Some other details do not feel cohesive with the article such as comparing the desensitization rate with P2RX1 and P2XR2. There is some confusion whether the article's focus is about the receptor or at times the gene. Figure use is poor/nonexistent: no image of the receptor structure or cellular pathways regulating receptor trafficking although both are discussed. Only one section on neuropathic pain appears to have physiological application; however, the introduction mentions other types of cells expressing this receptor.

Talk page

 * There is only one comment on the talk page back from 2013 that states the editor restructured and expanded the content of the article. No further discussion is present.

Option 2

 * Article title: Granulocyte colony-stimulating factor receptor

Content

 * Subsections have few sentences and editing of each section appears incomplete. More discussion on intracellular pathways could be discussed. Could add recent findings in other cell types such as in the nervous system. Could expand information on effects of cancer.

Talk page

 * No discussion present on the Talk page.