User:Rk0411/Hoop (rhythmic gymnastics)/Cwhite24 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rk0411


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rk0411/Hoop_%28rhythmic_gymnastics%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hoop (rhythmic gymnastics)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the paragraph she has so far is very good. Her ideas are also good, solid start for references as well. Adding the history is a nice touch. It looks like the initial article has very little information, so I like how she's already branching it out.

Overall no bias in her writing and overall informative. Also very clear.