User:Rk0411/Hoop (rhythmic gymnastics)/HCL122 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rk0411


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rk0411/Hoop_%28rhythmic_gymnastics%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * n/a

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the source used could be changed; a source from a database could be great, or from a .edu site. The paragraph is well written but lacks citations for claims made.