User:Rk052020/sandbox

Peer Review Suggestions:

User Zweathersby conducted a peer review of my draft article and edits. The recommendations where found to be helpful. My peer suggested that I break up my sentences a bit more in order to help them to be a bit more comprehensive. They also suggested possibly adding a couple of more subheadings in order to help the information not appear so overwhelming- which I do agree with. My challenge will be to find the most appropriate areas to break up and determine what information may be overly detailed. I found my peer's feedback to be helpful and informative. I will incorporate these suggestions into my next editing phase.