User:Rkeaveny/Long-term effects of cannabis/Krainer02 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rkeaveny


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Long-term effects of cannabis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section of this article could better present the topic of the article. The lead section in a way, only describes that there is limited evidence of the topic as hand. As far as the chronic psychosis and schizophrenia section, it could be organized better so that the information is presented in a way that is not overwhelming to the reader. One suggestion is to try to put some information under subtopics so that it is easier to keep up with the information being presented. Eliminating wordiness is another suggestion that could be made. Concisely presenting information as well as aiming to get at the point would make for a more thorough article for readers. If I am not mistaken, the latest information obtained from sources was from 2018. If possible, I would look for more studies that discuss recent findings of long-term affects of cannabis. That is the one way I would suggest for content improvement. After adjustments made, I think that the article overall will give a great impression to readers.