User:Rkmomanyi/Adverse Childhood Experiences/Ijbates Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Rkmomanyi
 * Adverse Childhood Experiences movement

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * This article has been updated by the user.
 * It includes a new introduction.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes, their is a brief summary of the article.
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? No, not from what I read.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? No, I thought it was interesting and concised.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes, I believe so.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? yes.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? No, I feel as though they did a great job.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? For the most part I felt persuaded.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? Overrepresented.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? Yes, I noticed a persuasion.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Yes.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes.
 * Are the sources current? Yes.
 * Check a few links. Do they work? Yes, they did.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes, i felt it was well written.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? No.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Yes.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? Yes.
 * Are images well-captioned? No.
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? Yes.
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? Yes.

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject? Yes.
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject? Yes.
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles? Yes.
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable? Yes.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? Definitely.
 * What are the strengths of the content added? It brought structure to the article, made it easier to follow along.
 * How can the content added be improved? Less persuasion.

Overall evaluation
Excellent revising.