User:Rky497/Natasha Sheybani/Rojinkharrazi Peer Review

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Rky497


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 * User:Rky497/Natasha Sheybani
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Intro[edit][edit]
I know on friday you were talking about how your introduction paragraph feels a little short, you can maybe add to the introduction by talking about what the significance of her FUS method is.

Content[edit][edit]
Dont forget to add categories

Tone and Balance[edit][edit]
No biased tone in my opinion

Organization[edit][edit]
I would suggest you put the "Publications" section last instead of the "Awards" section

Under Education, You said "Natasha Sheybani earned her Bachelor of Science (with honors) i....." I think it would be nice if you add an extra sentence regarding her being in the honors program rather than mentioning her honors program in parenthesis