User:Rlocker1/Media portrayal of LGBT people/Cocobutter295 Peer Review

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Rlocker1


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 * User:Rlocker1/Media portrayal of LGBT people


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Evaluate the drafted changes
HI Ryanne! This is a wonderful piece that you have written and it is packed with lots of information. The only thing I would say is to revisit some of the sentences within the piece to ensure that you have a smooth flow and transition but asides from that, this is amazing.