User:Rlyantonio/Slave Old Man/Hprice1986 Peer Review

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GreenTea32, Kcraven12, Rlyantonio


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 * User:Rlyantonio/Slave Old Man


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Evaluate the drafted changes
The introduction is short and sweet. The summary is extremely short, is the book lacking that much detail? I'm surprised it is only a single paragraph. Characters section looks well constructed. The history section is a nice addition. I do feel the structure section should be closer to the summary or even included in the introductory/summary section.