User:Rmarkley12/Education in India/Nidhipatel0943 Peer Review

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user: Rmarkley12/education in india


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Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi! I really enjoyed your article. Here some quick feedback that I centered around the questions provided taht can help.

Content: This section is pretty good. I have mentioned specifics and some strategies you might want to consider below.

Tone and Balance: Most of your information is presented in a fact like manner, so I am not too worried about this section. You present multiple viewpoints of the same idea especially when discussing the stats, which I really found to be helpful. You do have two sentences isolated which I am a little confused about, but they do support your claim.

Sources and References: You have three sources listed, but only one references the actual material. I would focus on more on incorporating the sources within your writing. It also would not hurt to find a diverse range of sources, possibly look into more journal like entries or first-hand accounts of deaf people facing educational problems.

Organization: I really enjoy that your content within your well-divided sections is concise and extremely easy to read. Your word choice is on point and I would not worry anything more about this section.

Article Requirements: you have checked off all the criteria in this section and the sources match what you have written and accurately flow with what you have provided

Overall Impressions: I know your topic is very specific, but I would suggests branching out to more specific projects targeting deaf education in India, just so there a little bit more in your article