User:RmtzWIKI/Cosmetics advertising/Melodymhl Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)

Bidhi Mandal


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

For what I got so far, I only saw a brief introduction about diversity in computing, but it think it's a good start since it provide some potential focuses that you can expand. For example, you can expand upon the two issues you mentioned in the paragraph.