User:Rn15440/After Apple-Picking/Scorpio1028 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rn15440


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rn15440/After_Apple-Picking?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * After Apple-Picking

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is almost identical to the original so there isn't much to say. I like that you added that the poem was 42 lines, just a small detail that makes sense.

I like how you reworked the summary from the original. It makes sense that you removed the scholarly interpretation and made a new subheading since interpretation isn't really part of a summary. Maybe you could expand on the last sentence about the desire for rest and include a reference or citation at that part too. Other than that I think it's a good summary that is clear and concise, especially considering the poem is 42 lines.

The interpretation subheading is new but I think it adds a lot to the article. I wonder if you can find any interpretations that stray away from the one you've already mentioned—I think that would be interesting to add to the article. Maybe you can make a new subheading about symbolism in the poem instead of keeping that last sentence under interpretation.

The article you started with had almost nothing so I think you've already done a great job in fixing it up, but I do think there are some ideas you can flesh out a little more. Some of your sources check out, but I'm not sure if litcharts, sparknotes, and shmoop would be good sources for a wikipedia article. Perhaps you can find other sources that support the same points you're making. Other than that I think your article is off to a really great start.