User:Robinsonmaddux2000/Feminist Media Studies/ReginaPhalange4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Robinsonmaddux2000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Robinsonmaddux2000/Feminist_Media_Studies?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Feminist Media Studies

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has been updated, and the content to be discussed is explained clearly. It doesn't seem like there's an overview of the article's sections yet, but that may be a part of the plan down the road. The content is relevant and up-to-date. The article does deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps. I think these sources seem reliable and up-to-date, and that they seem like great jumping off sources (if not concluding sources). The lead is concise, although the body seems to be filled with lots of names, which is good, but not necessarily super informative other than that (at least that's how it appears). Overall the content seems strong and appears to be going in the right direction, it just feels like it needs a little bit more info about the publication itself, perhaps?

~ ReginaPhalange4