User:Robinsonmaddux2000/Feminist Media Studies/Ronaldreagann Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Robinsunmaddux2000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Robinsonmaddux2000/Feminist_Media_Studies?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead includes a sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic. It is properly cited and well written. The body is not finished, but there is a great start as she describes the origin of feminist media studies with also properly cited work.

I think to enhance this work, there could be more background and history of feminist media studies and ways it has evolved to what it is now.

All of the work so far is concise, to the point, and well written. Continuing this trend throughout all of your work will be important.

From the original stub, there is already a much better body to this page and lead.