User:Robynbest/Women warriors in literature and culture/JoePayne6467 Peer Review

General info
BobynBest
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Robynbest/Women warriors in literature and culture - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Women warriors in literature and culture - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
-looks like a good addition of sources not present in the article's current iteration. Adding examples from other cultures like Dahomey, Indigenous warriors will be vital to expansion of content. Currently published article only mentions Indigenous women once, in the context of their status as warriors being used to justify colonial violence.

-The word Africa currently does not appear in the article. This shows an identifiable information gap.

-more sources should be publicly visible (It looks like work is being done in a Google doc, but I can't evaluate that as a peer editor)

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