User:Robynbest/Women warriors in literature and culture/NominallyNaomi Peer Review

General info
Robynbest
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Robynbest/Women warriors in literature and culture
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Women warriors in literature and culture

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * I think my main critique of the content you're hoping to add is that the article is specifically about women warriors in literature and culture--it's about representations of these women, not the women themselves. So if you could find stories, legends, books, artwork, etc of Buffalo Road Calf Woman, Dahomey Amazons, Ching Shih, etc, that would fit well! But otherwise, I think your info might be a little off-topic
 * I think it's great that you're looking to be super diverse in what you include!
 * Would love to see your sources for this one! Once you have a more complete article draft I'd love to revisit this and see where you take it
 * Could also be good for the article if you flagged unsourced material that's already there! There seems to be quite a few points that aren't properly attributed
 * I think in terms of placement, if you could find a literary/cultural representation of these women, the cultural section would be a good spot for it