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 * in Rules section of article
 * Current text:
 * While the game is often played for fun, it is also frequently used as a form of bullying, where a personal item (such as a backpack) is taken from the victim and the bullies throw it between each other as they try to catch it.
 * update:
 * While the game is often played for fun, it is also frequently used as a form of bullying, where a personal item (such as a backpack) is taken from the victim and the bullies throw it between each other as the victim tries to catch it.
 * changes:
 * grammatical, for clarity