User:Roccostrangio/2019–2021 locust infestation/Galsvartz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Roccostrangio


 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Roccostrangio/2019%E2%80%932021_locust_infestation?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)2019–2021 locust infestation
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)2019–2021 locust infestation

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think that the images that you are adding do add valuable information to the article. I also believe that both of your images have been placed in positions in the draft that make sense. What I would say is just try to find out which country in West Africa that the image with the pesticide workshop is taking place. I would also try to add more details about the black and yellow colored locust that you added. I would try to find out where it is native to.