User:Roccostrangio/2019–2021 locust infestation/Makenna Williams Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Roccostrangio


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Roccostrangio/2019%E2%80%932021_locust_infestation?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 2019–2021 locust infestation

Evaluate the drafted changes
The images added are up to date. Regarding tone and balance, the content added was neutral and did not lean toward any particular side. The images added are organized and well-placed according to the relative information in the article. The chosen images enhanced my understanding of the article and provided me with a much needed visual to connect with. They are visually appealing and have well-written captions.

Without the caption under the second image, you'd never know that the person was giving a pesticide workshop. I wonder if the editor could've chosen a better image to relate to the issue. I feel as though this particular image did not give enough to improve the overall quality of the article.