User:Roccostrangio/2019–2021 locust infestation/Warrenfan18 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Roccostrangio/2019–2021 locust infestation


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Roccostrangio/2019%E2%80%932021_locust_infestation?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 2019–2021 locust infestation

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The content added has improved the quality of the article. The strength of the content added is that there was no image of what a locust was on the already existing page. The content added could be improved by checking the English on the sections of the article that are going to be drafted.