User:Rochesterstudent/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Nasir-ol-Molk Mosque

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I choose this article because it is the topic of my article and I will be going off of it when writing my final publication. It will help me identify what I can add and improve on for my work.

Evaluate the article
Lead Section: The lead does mention information not included in the article. It mentions the Panj Kase design; however, does not ever further elaborate on this design in the article.

Content: The content is very limited, more detailed could be added in all aspects including the history, building of the mosque, and architectural features in the mosque.

Tone and Balance: The tone is a strength of this article. It remains relatively neutral.

Sources and References: Few references are used. Some facts are not cited such as the earliest discovered use of stained glass being in Syria.

Organization and Writing Quality: The article is concise, clear, and easy to read. It does not include any unnecessary information. There are no grammatical or spelling errors. The article is broken up into logical sections.

Images and Media: The images and media could be improved. Most of the images are included at the end at the Gallery section. It could be helpful to include the images if they are being mentioned in the article so that there is context to each image and its purpose is more clear.

Talk page discussion: Questions on the talk page include clarifying questions about the mosque such as what the exact location of it is. The article is rated start-class and is part of the Architecture, Iran, and Islam: Mosques projects.

Overall impressions: The article's strengths are that it provides basic information in a clear and concise way, but it is incomplete. There is a good amount of information that must be added so that a reader can have a full understanding of the mosque and its features by reading the article.