User:Rockluver/Conservation grazing/WessNature Peer Review

I hope I'm typing in the right place. I added an s on "grazing animal" in the intro paragraph and I changed the word "wildlifes" to wild life in the second paragraph. I edited this in the direct article by accident before I figured out I wasn't supposed to be there.

I loved your concluding sentence added in the history section. You succinctly discussed multiple points of landscape destruction from grazing in a way easy for the reader to comprehend.

In the Regenerative Ag section, I would change "account for:" to "account for the following:" and in that same sentence define "padlock."

Overall, I think you did a great job and properly filled content gaps.

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