User:Roddamar/Alcoholic cardiomyopathy/Nbnmaria Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Roddamar


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Roddamar/Alcoholic_cardiomyopathy?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Alcoholic cardiomyopathy
 * Alcoholic cardiomyopathy

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: citation needed for last sentence. The lead should include a brief description of major sections in the article. Include acronyms (ACM) and (DCM) after alcoholic cardiomyopathy and dilated cardiomyopathy respectively since they are used later in the article.

A new section for epidemiology can be added to include the information about "most common in males" and other incidence/prevalence (age).

Signs and Symptoms: move citation after "include the following" (before bullet points)

Pathophysiology: link "genetic mutation", "troponin", "oxidative stress", and "mitochondrial" to appropriate wikipage.

Diagnosis: link "coronary artery blockage/disease"

Treatment: link "cardiomyopathy". Maybe include more information on how to abstain from alcohol (AA meetings, alcohol abuse programs, etc.)

Include citation where [citation needed] is referenced. This might be another good source: https://www.mdpi.com/2072-6643/12/2/572