User:Rogersn19/Hashtag activism/Alicialuna3 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rogersn19


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Hashtag activism - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hashtag activism - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this article has a lot of room for improvement. I saw a few punctuation mistakes at the beginning of the article that could be fixed. For example, the second sentence could say “cause through a like, share, repost, etc.” to make it more grammatically correct. Small things like that would make the article easier to follow.

Additionally, I think at the end of the paragraph where it discusses the critics and support for hashtag activism could be elaborated on a little more. The only give one example, so going into more detail to show support for both arguments would be beneficial for the reader. You can probably use the sources they have already used, but elaborate a little more using the same sources.

I really enjoy that they have a notable examples section in this Wikipedia site. However, I think this would be a great opportunity to add some more pictures of examples of how people are using Hashtag Activism in this section. There are a few pictures, but adding more would really help the reader get a visual on how it is being used.

I also think this would be a great opportunity to include Crandall and Cunningham (2016) article on Media Ecology and Hashtag Activism. Their article talks about the good and bad aspects of hashtag activism, so I think you can incorporate a lot. There are a lot of good sources on their article as well that could help you bring in some more journal article references to the Wikipedia page.

Additionally, there are not many very current references in the reference list. I only noticed a few from 2020, but most of them where from 2017 and earlier. I think it would be great to get some more current references that are from 2021 and 2022 if possible!

Overall, I think there is a lot of good material on this Wiki page, so just including some more information, pictures, journal articles, and using Crandall and Cunningham’s article will really help this page evolve into something great! Good luck!!