User:Rojinkharrazi/Heather Judkins/Bruhgirl Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rojinkharrazi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rojinkharrazi/Heather_Judkins?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your intro does a nice job of providing a clear and concise overview of the article. All the information is relevant and neutral. The images you included also give a nice touch to the article and allows readers to visualize the work that your uncommon leader does. For the section on Cephalopod Research, I suggest including some of the major findings or conclusions from her studies. This can come from one or more of the select publications you listed in the article as well. For the Awards section, I suggest including the institutions that gave her the awards just to provide more context/information about the awards. Lastly, since you mentioned her lab in the intro, I would suggest adding more information on what kind of research they do in her lab. Overall, the structure and organization of your article is great, it just needs a little more content in the sections I mentioned above.