User:Rollinsfox123/Espiritu Santo Bay/Baileypringle8 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rollinsfox123


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Espiritu Santo Bay


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the author did a great job of separating the opening information from the features and the history. I think that helps readers choose what they want to read and clearly see the separation of information. I would suggest adding in visuals so people can start to imagine what the bay looks like. I think I need to also add a history section in my article because that helps people understand the origin of the topic.