User:Rollinsfox123/Espiritu Santo Bay/Mdoughty332 Peer Review

The article has a good introduction to where the bay is and its size as well as a good description of its characteristics and importance to the area but, it is lacking in sources that could help enhance the article. Some more descriptions and possibly some visuals could help make it flow better and signify why it is important and how it differs from the other surrounding areas. A conclusion of some sort would help as well since it’s kind of ends on a thought that would be good to expand on as it is an interesting point. The characteristics could be introduced in a different way to help it flow better as it seems like starting a new paragraph when you introduce them would be beneficial. Overall, this article is good and has some interesting information but, more sources and expanding on some of the information could really help the article as a whole as well as some structural changes and additions.

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