User:Romabala/Adivasi/Sparklehorse23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Romabala


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Romabala/Adivasi
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Adivasi

Evaluate the drafted changes
The writer has introduced a new Section to the existing article Adivasi. With that said, the author should provide a legend from a stylistic perspective as currently, one would have to check the original article to determine if the paragraph is a completely new section. Furthermore, the author needs to add citations for each sentence he added to provide evidence supporting such claims.

Contentwise, the author's writings provide a general review of Adivasi's adversities under the Modi administration. However, the second paragraph does not seem to fit into the discussion of the topic, as it shifts the focus from Adivasi's experience in India to other indigenous people. I suggest that the author should include more detailed information on Modi's targeted policies on Adivasi and the relevant developments following such policies. The author might also consider revising or even deleting the second paragraph so that the new section is more concise and concentrated on the Adivasi population itself.