User:Romarcum/Fender's blue butterfly/Addiekni Peer Review

General info
Romarcum
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Romarcum/Fender%27s_blue_butterfly?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Fender's blue butterfly

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I like the added information in the lead section about distinguishing sex and it fits well with the other parts of the lead. The morphology section is really well written, and the only comment I have is I think there shouldn't be a comma after "both sexes" in the 4th sentence. In the habitat destruction section, I thought the phrase "the butterflies face habitat loss due to the lack of ability to fly from one patch to another" sounded a little bit awkward, it seems like their inability to fly between patches is not really what's causing the habitat loss and its more like a reason the habitat loss is particularly devastating. I also thought "lack of ability" sounded a little bit clunky, and maybe using "inability" would make it smoother. I think it might be good to add a sentence explaining what Kincaid's lupine is too. In the second paragraph, in "Invasive plant species are also contributing to habitat destruction, such as Himalayan blackberry and Scotch broom," having the names of the plants at the end makes it sound like they are examples of habitat destruction, so maybe it could be "species such as..." I think there might be a word missing after high in "Invasive grasses contribute to habitat destruction due to its high obscuring Kincaid's Lupine." I thought all of the information added was really interesting and fit well into the preexisting article.