User:RomilyC/Lapita culture/Sumeya333 Peer Review

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General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? RomilyC
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:RomilyC/sandbox

Lead
From what I understand, the lead has not been updated by my peer. So far they have update the "distribution" and "Dating" section.This is just the beginning so I imagine the Lead will be updated soon.

Content
The content added to this article is relevant thus far. They added information that is up to date (matched with the sources and referneces) and added important details to both sections they updated. I believe as a study of a 'Prehistoric' Pacific Islander culture, this falls under Wikipedia's equity gaps.

Tone and Balance
The content is neutal and unbiased. Romily di a good job of attaching historically relevant dates and citing those occurences. Overall, the content is very informative and isn't trying to persuade the reader to favor one position over another.

Sources and References
The source used is a reliable secondary resources that is also relevant to this topic. It doesn't specify the name of the author for me (could be an incomplete citation or a glitch on my end) but it is from the University of Auckland which undoubtedly had more experience being in closer range with the Pacific Islands. The in text citations and links leading to other Wiki pages are all accurate.

Organization
This work is easy to read, well written and informative. There aren't any grammatical or spelling errors and the pragraphs are well organized (flow easily).

Images and Media
There are no images or media so far.

Overall impressions
Overall this is a really good piece so far. It is informative and well cited like any good Wikipedia page, and my peer has put in lots of effort to make the informative be as accessible and easy to read as possible. One strength would be the quality of writing, and Romily could improve by introducing more sources.