User:RongpengZ/Rescue Mission Syracuse/JJ415 Peer Review

General info
Emichiang & RongpengZ
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:RongpengZ/Rescue Mission Syracuse
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):There’s no current version of the article.

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The introduction is clear and concise. It gives readers a clear understanding of what the organization does and its significance in Syracuse, New York.

Contents: The article succinctly introduces the organization, its status as a private nonprofit, its establishment date, and its location. Additionally, it provides key information about the mission statement and the range of services provided by Rescue Mission Syracuse.

For New Article: Their article meet the requirements of Wikipedia's notability. They utilized a lot of information, and the article overall is very clear and coherent. Each paragraph introduces the various functions of this mission in great detail.

Overall impression: I think they've written it very well, and I appreciate the effort they put into it; it's very worthwhile for me to learn from.