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Slavery in ancient Rome.

The details in the body are fine, but the introductory has some improvised assumptions.

WikiProject Human Rights.

The Article is an entire page dedicated to improving human rights, including countries with problems on slavery. Provides links to organizations and groups who help in doing these tasks to learn more about them. The article is neutral in showing what the world is doing to improve lives as it only provides links to these groups. What would be useful however, would be to better organize the page itself and it needs a clear tab on more examples of human trafficking and what these organizations have accomplished.

Article Selection.

Article 1: Black Refugee (War of 1812) - The article has plenty of details, but it does have a few spelling and grammar issues with some details that aren't really necessary for learning about slavery. More details are needed on the hardships of these slaves escaping from the U.S. to live free in Nova Scotia.

Article 2: Diogenes and Alexander - There are grammar issues in some parts of the article, but it also lacks a section that teaches the importance of the message on slavery or the poor during that time.

Article 3: Pope Callixtus I - Grammar issues and a few details that seem fuzzy and need to be improved upon.

Article 4: Modern Slavery Act 2015 - Grammar issues and some details need to be informed on the matter.

Article 5: Slavery in Contemporary Africa - Has a lot of details, but needs them more in depth.

Edited Article 1

Article Chosen: Child Prostitution in Thailand

Sources:

https://www.journals.uchicago.edu/doi/abs/10.1086/430079

https://www.emeraldinsight.com/doi/abs/10.1108/01443330910947507

https://www.annualreviews.org/doi/abs/10.1146/annurev.anthro.31.040402.085359