User:Ronismith9/Cornell-Peru Project/Dmahasin Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Roni Smith
 * Link: User:Ronismith9/Cornell-Peru Project

Lead

 * The Lead been updated to reflect the new content.
 * Introductory sentence properly reflects content covered in body. If anything, touching on the "how" regarding the information included at the end of the article (the funding/ the function in initiating the program) may be helpful in making the Lead more whole.
 * The Lead includes a brief description of the article's major sections.
 * Lead is relevant to information included in the article.
 * The Lead is concise.

Content

 * Content added is relevant and up to date.
 * The article address a topic related to historically underrepresented populations and topics.

Tone and Balance

 * Content added is neutral and unbiased.
 * Content does not attempt to persuade reader to take on one viewpoint or another.

Sources and References

 * All new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information.
 * All sources are thorough and the links work.

Organization

 * Unclear if the professor Allan Holmberg was a professor at Cornell or Columbia. Other than this, content is organized, clear, and easy to read.

Images and Media

 * No media or images were added.

For New Articles Only

 * The article is supported by 2 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject.
 * This article links to other articles so it is more discoverable.

Overall impressions

 * Content is thorough and covers the "who what where when why and how" of the topic.
 * Additional information could be added in order to improve the article.