User:RooftopWriter/Aimee Cox/Cwall114 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Rooftop Writer)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:RooftopWriter/Aimee_Cox?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think this was a very thorough article on the life of Aimee Cox. All of your information seemed relevant to the article topic. The article was also neutral I don’t think there were any viewpoints that were biased. I believe that all the information was current and cited correctly. The one thing I think that could use some work is that the lead section seems a little long. It seems to be doing more than describing the article topic and describing the article's major sections. Maybe some of that information could be put into some of the other sections. Overall I think that the article was concise, easy to read, and clear.